Descriptive Language Features

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The descriptive writing activity is using Descriptive language.

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There is a list of language features to help create descriptive.

The objective of the Descriptive writing activity is so improve descriptive language.

About Me 2020

About Me 2020

Malo lele. 

My name is Viliami. I am Tonga. I am in LS1 at Panmure Bridge School. 

I enjoy playing sports for my school because I like touch and rugby league and I play with my
friends in the field. My favorite sport is rugby and I love it because we can tackle and ankle
tap them on the feet and we can bump them off. I like tag and go home and stay home.

My Family Backround

This week is the Manaiakalani SLJ Teaser Week. The theme for this year is called "change makers".
This theme will help us learn more about incredible people who have changed the world.
For this activity I worked on my own to complete this activty. To complete this task I was asked to think
of someone who has had a positive impact in my life. Below I have written a short description of who this
person is and what they did to make me become a person that I am today. 

Under Over by the Clover

Preposition show us where, like in your bed, beside the chair under, over, by the clover, about above or next to Rover, they tell us time and also place like past 9.30 in your face During break-time, after school, and between the pond and pool. Ever since the olden days there’s been a silly myth. That prepositions aren’t correct to end a sentence with. But write your sentence carefully and you’ll discover that Ending with prepositions is often where it’s at. Prepositions point the way, like, doctors rushed to where sue lay. Or Charlie dance the charleston over on the green, Down beyond around the bend, along the old ravin. Across the bay towards mississippi, through the yard of chris, the hippy. 

prepositions do their job in a way just amazes-Relating
nouns and pronouns to other words and phrases.
Like paul’s from pittsburgh,way up there, I hid b
eneath the old oak chair-Into, inside, from the
zoo,Home by way of timbuktu.They tell the whens,
wheres, hows,cause’ that’s their special mission,
They help to link the others words- and that’s a
prepositions so, what is a prepositions? Do you know?

Word Cline

Today we did word cline and we had to think what goes to small or big.

Writing

Ki Oraka

Last Thursday we went to Ki Rahi
and it was fun and we did some
games but it was a hard game
because we had to get the
other teams is tagit but we
couldn't get the tagit because
they were fast and we almost
catch them but they cooked
a try then the yellow team
had to kick then the red
team got it I was in there
and I frowed the ball
then Fotu came and
said pass I got a way
and I said okay then
he passed the ball
to paul the paul
gotta try for us
and me and paul
said good job and I said
thank you paul and he
said it's okay paul then
the yellow team got it and
shnatch it off our team then
coach Sharnes said break time then
we had to have a drink and then we
went to her then we start spotting then
we kick off it was almost time to pack up
then we took a Photo and we said ki Rahi
then next we said coach Sharnes is the best
she is then I help her only 4 people and it was
fun and I was exsities. 

Compound Sentences

I liked the party and I was so happy and a little bit
sad because it was a little boring.

Dad cooked a nasty dinner and for our dinner was
chicken and pig.

You must go now or you will get lost.

Today it was fun because at morning tea we were
playing tag and it was fun.

My mum said come but I said no.

I said to my friend come and he said yes.

I was asking my dad what does nor

mean.

My dad said come over here to play some
games but I said not yet.

In the holidays

In the holidays

During the holidays I had a headache.It was hurting
very much and I had to drink water to get it well. It was at home.After I had to drink more water and
a panadol to get it better.Finally it got better after
I had to go to my uncle is house to bring some
chicken and we ate ice block the flavour was
blueberries it was yummy and delicious. 

At last I went back home and shower and
I went to sleep and my mum said’’ good night
and my dad and my sister to then we went to sleep.

About my holiday

In the holidays I went with my whole family
and went to Rotorua and it was fun and all the
children played race and rugby and tag and it
was fun and this was awi first time there.
After we ate some food and when it got
night everyone sleep we had to bart and
when it got morning everyone had to come
to the hall to ate breakfast and I ate chocolate
and pie and when we finish Eating and this was a
family Reunion and we had to play touch and I
was in my Uncle team and I had a run and I step
but I folid over and I puse to my cousin and she
scowled the try.Next the Other team came it was
my cousin and I  coached them but it had to finish
because we had to ate dinner and we ate samewig
and it was hummy and pizza and water and when we
finish Eating we played some music and it was
mate ma'a tonga song and then we change the
song to owoh my baby and everyone was dancing
and we had fun with everyone. toWillow Treewe
went to the sky line and it was scary and when we
got there we went on this car drive and I came
first and I was happy and next we went there
are again and I went on the advaness and when
you go down it thinks like you are going to fail
down and when you turn around you have to hold
on Tight because you are going to fail and we had
ice cream and my Favourite ice cream is chocolate
chip and magow and it was hum as it was pekinow
and I  was hungry and when we came back to home
we played outside with the baby and we had fun with them.

Personal Recount planner

      Personal Recount planner

Task - To write a personal recount about a time you went to the zoo

LI - Use adjectives to describe your feelings and surroundings

SC - Your work will have a title

Your work will be planned into 3 paragraphs

You will have described your feelings

You will have described your surroundings

PLANNING

1.The day before Dad and mum 2. I saw some allgates 3In the last part I got a photo

The zoo

1.In 2018 I went to the zoo with my family and I was happy. I got there in my mum's
' car and my dad drove us and my mum and dad and sister went to the zoo.
We parked the car in the zoo car park in the shaded place so our car could
cool down. 

2.The first thing we did was go to the giraffe and I saw the long neck and
some babies and the giraffe the colour was yellow and it was summer.

2.After I saw some lions and it was big and there was some fighting and
some sleeping and there was a glass it was hard to push it and I was
putting my finger on the glass and it was so long.

3.Next I saw some elephant it was like stinky there was some poo there
and I ran away and I fell down on the grass and I was touching the
elephant and it was soft and the color was gray.

4.At the end I took a photo and I got some loles and it was yum and
it was the best day ever and I was happy and I miss it because that
was my favorite zoo ever.              

Editing checklist:

Capital letters Full stops Simple sentence Compound sentence Commas Adjectives Verbs

Complex Sentences

Simple - 

She plays with my toys.

Complex - 

She plays with my toys, before she goes to bed.

Before she goes to bed, she plays with my toys.

Today in class I did a complex sentence and simple. We looked inside a library book for a simple sentences. When we wrote the complex we wrote it forwards and backwards.

Word Cline

Today we did Word cline and I was very hard to think what was the words and we had to try our best.

Swiming

Today it was our last day of swimming.
We had a fun activity and it was the best we had
to do a chain and we had to hold each other and we
tried to push our feet so we could go faster and faster
and we had to go in a circle and some of the swimming teachers
help us go to the wall so we don’t drown and it was hard to breathe
because it was the life jacket. Then we did we had to huddle in a circle
and ten people had to hold each other and it was hard to go in a circle
because we had to not put our feet on top. Next we had to do touch the
bottom and it was so hard to go and touch the bottom because it was our life
jackets that was doing it and it was the best day ever.

The Glass House

Photo courtesy of: Photo Big

Once upon a time there was a house called the glass house.
It was built in New York. It might be there for clothes and
shoes and everything. That is with different kinds of colours
like blue, pink, black, red, and purple. There were doors
around it so people can go inside it and will be wonderful.
If people could go there and say hey this is a nice place
sometimes we could buy clothes and shoes and chromebooks
so you can take it. Then a person came and said that their
chromebook was broken and they wanted it to be fixed.

Then the man took the chromebook and went and fixed
the chromebook but the chromebook was damaged and
took a long time to fix it. The months later the chromebook
was fixed a gave it to the person and they gave him 400$ for
fixing the chromebook and the man was rich to buy some stuff
for his shop. 

Word Cline

Today we did Word cline and I was very hard to think what was the words and we had to try our best.

Interesting sentences

We stood outside for twenty minutes

We stood outside for twenty tiring Minutes.

On Sunday morning we stood outside for twenty tiring minutes.

I Statement

I Statements

I feel embarrassed when I get in trouble because I think people are laughing at me.

I feel happy if you are nice to other kids because I know that you are being
friendly to them.

Student Lead Conference

Student Led Conference

Yesterday I went to Student Led Conference with my mum and sister.
I went at 3pm. First Mrs Kirkpatrick gave us the script.

First I started at reading and I told my mum about the hot dog and the
party time hotdog. After I showed her my moon paragraphs it was topic
sentences and supporting sentences and ending sentences. It has to be
red orange and green and my one was next to Fala.Then I showed her my
maths and she said wow that's amazing and we did measurement and number
and geometry and cm and mm and m and km. Next I had to go to pause and
think online and I showed her how to screenshot on your chromebook.After I
went to my whakatauki and my colors were blue and it was cool and my one
was next to paul and after. I went to the next step it was our planets and mine
was the first and I did the moon and it was very beautiful.

 Then I went to my star and it was green and we wrote some words on our star,
and next I went to the stripey wall and there was gymnastics and kiwican and
chop suey salute and it was fun there. Next I went to the hibiscus flowers and my
color was orange and yellow and mine was the bottom one. My mum was happy
and me and after I went to INQUIRY. We are learning about space and the planets
and the Dwarf planets. At Last we had to show them our blog and I published 30
and I after I had to go on my learning journey and we had to go on Room 5 2019
and and my mum and sister said good after I said to me my mum would you like
to speak to my teacher and my mum said yes and after she went then paul
came into room5 with his mum and brother.

I like going to student lead conference it is fun telling my sister what I have
been doing. My sister likes my poem and she was proud of the amount of work
I have been doing. 

Word Cline

Today we did Word Word Cline and we started with Sizable because we started with the smallest.

5 -7 -10 The surprise mouse

Photo courtesy of Valery Subachev, one big photo

Once upon a time there was a mouse in his hole he didn't have a family.
But  that could be sad because he might get bitten from cat’s and will not be
okay so we should look after mice and rabbits. And any kind of animal and we
should fix the problem of mouse and we should find family for mice and rabbit’s and they
could have a baby and they might die. Why should we look after animals because
we might not have no animals and it will be sad and sometimes animals can be
dangerous and they might bite you and it will be sour and you could cry and
we should not have mice that stink.    

Today we did The surprised mouse we had to do Problem's and solution and it was quite hard.